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<B><FONT SIZE="-1" FACE="Arial">Certainly, there are companies
out there that offer similar services. In making such a critical
decision, why choose B-School Essays?<BR>
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</FONT><U><FONT FACE="Arial">Business school essays are what
we focus on.</FONT></U><FONT SIZE="-1" FACE="Arial"> <BR>
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Unlike most of the larger outfits, we concentrate our efforts
on the business school market, because that's what we know, inside
and out. We don't pretend to understand what Admissions Committees
for law school or medical school are looking for, but we DO know
what the business schools are looking for. And we choose to focus
on the essay portion, as therein lies the critical difference
between two candidates, one who is accepted to the top school
of his choice, and one who isn't. The rest of the elements need
to be presented in the best possible light, but if you've ever
put together a resume or studied for a standardized test, you
know what to do. <BR>
<BR>
</FONT><U><FONT FACE="Arial">We are writers, not just proofreaders
or people with Admissions Committee experience.</FONT></U><FONT
SIZE="-1" FACE="Arial"> <BR>
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The foundation of B-School Essays was built on strong writing
skills, writing that draws people in and makes them remember
what they read long after they're through reading it. Our marketing
background also enables us to take your experience and position
your accomplishments and background in such a way as to show
it to the greatest advantage, in a sparkling, interesting manner.
In addition, each essay is reviewed by someone who has not only
been through the application process but has also gained acceptance
to at least several of the top schools, thereby ensuring that
they understand the process from all vantage points. Our competitors
who use solely former Admissions Committee members as their reviewers
may have people who understand what they're looking for in an
essay, but who will be unable to take a raw essay and help craft
it into the finely honed work that it needs to be.<BR>
<BR>
</FONT><U><FONT FACE="Arial">We do not use templates or checklists.
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You'll never hear us talk about a "formula for success"
or "must-haves" for each application or essay, nor
will we use a cookie-cutter formula for your essays that an Admissions
Committee member can spot a mile away. One odd fact that many
in the business won't tell you is one winning application may
have very little in common with another. Your application needs
to be as different from that of the others who use our services
as it is from the general applicant population. Therefore, each
essay will be looked at and evaluated on its own merits and we
will work with you to develop an essay that captures your own
unique footprints. No one will be checking to make sure that
you have exactly three amusing anecdotes and two references to
your parents in your essay. Each successful candidate is successful
in his or her own unique way, and that is what we will help you
achieve. <BR>
<BR>
</FONT><U><FONT FACE="Arial">We will not spoon-feed you your
essay.</FONT></U><FONT SIZE="-1" FACE="Arial"> <BR>
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There are some companies that will offer to do everything but
hold your hand as you go to submit your completed application.
This inevitably backfires, as only the applicant can truly bring
out why the pursuit of an MBA is so important at this point in
his or her life. Other companies will offer to coach and prod
you into writing on a certain topic in a certain way, or will
outline for you what form your essay will take. We believe that
the basic elements of the essay have to come from you, while
our substantive feedback, commentary, suggestions, and revisions
will help polish it into a final product. We will not write your
essay for you. We know that you can get into the school of your
choice on your own merits, and that is what we'll help you do.</FONT></B></TD>
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